First Draft of Magazine Article

This below was my first draft of the magazine article that i created on the programme Adobe InDesign, i combinded the style of the magazines Empire Magazine and Sight and Sound Magazine to create the layout of it which i thought worked well. We used the same colours from our poster as we did for the magazine article, this was pink and blue which represented boys and girls which was the decision we made from the poster 'It's a Boy Girl Thing' which is the poster below

This is our first draft of the magazine article

Unfortunately this is the edited version of our first draft but you can get the idea of what we were intending to do.